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Very good !

Short but efficient tutorial.
I want just to precise that "The Animator's Survival Kit" (by Richard Williams), that I own, is a very complete book for those who want to go further.

Gameplay to develop

The idea is good, the whole needs more development to be very good.
It reminds me the "snake" game, which can become quickly boring.

But it's a nice try, please go on.

Could be better !

Well, the shapes are original, there is something to exploit to be definitely different from classics, but you didn't go this far.
Different bonus, ennemies could enhance the game, for instance.

Do better next time, you can !

great

Well done Sev4.
Your drawing is neat & clean. The character differs a little from the original but it's your personal touch, interpretation, she seems to be more alive.

With such a sensibility, I can't wait to see your next work.

Keep the mojo !!!